sharks!

Do you think that sharks are bad?

Rachel, a nine year old girl thinks sharks aren’t bad and its just there pray is us humans. When she was in second grade she and other class mates wrote a story about them. I, Rachel figured  out that most people judge sharks even before they know them.Rachel, her self judged them before she know about them. But  she knows that there is nothing wrong with them.

“Do people cure about sharks” I ask Sarah, she, not like me wrote or know about them. She doesn’t know how sharks don’t bite people for fun they do because it is what they got taught when a kid. I ask her ”do you like sharks”. She replays “well it deepens. If  you bother then they don’t hurt you then I think their good.(up to here it’s good but as you start to read on she is judging them by how they might have acted and being raced about how they acted ). I don’t like them  “she says because they just go around hurting people and not curing.

And there you have folks people just don’t cure about sharks and go around judging them badly before even knowing about them.

punch!punch!

i am so mad at my sister.first she punched me and then, when i told on her, she made up a total lie! luckily my dad looked strait throw the act!

willow smith

here is some of my work for kids, its based on music:

I’m here talking about the new song by Willow Smith…….21 century girl!!!!!!!!!!!

The buzz is that this is a cool, rocking, amazing song. I love this song! It’s great for any type of girl and is made by a kid! How lucky can you get!

I was just wondering “do fans like Willow Smith’s song I whip my hair back and forth better than 21 century girl?”Well, what do you think?  Which one?

I have another question, who do you like better Katy Perry or Willow Smith?

Willow smith  v.s. katy perry

my work

i 'm gonna post my writing work for everyone can connect to my work! my work can be from busy parents to  rocked out kids!some of my work will be for kids and not for adults but some of my work is for kids

frist time

hello people of the internet and welcome to my blog!as you can tel by the name i really into dance.i prefer hip-hop but can settle for African or ballet.I'm also really into writing i.i love to write with all my heart! i have a twin whose into singing. i guess you could say were the performing twins! got to go!:)-dancewrite