Friday, February 22, 2013

                                                  me

                                 
i haven't  really posted in a long time. I'm more of a story teller than a blogger. i feel that when you write you can imagine yourself doing things that seem imposble or thing that are incredible brave. but one thing that's has to be in my story's is a character that some way is like me. for intestine I'm writing this story about a girl and her two best friends a 7 year old that treats her like a sister and a ten year old that is her crush and a star athlete without the brains that has to go on a incredible risky adventure to save her friend ( that is jelious of) from the evil witch house because he's a scardy cat . i imagine myself that main girl because like me she is smart and a leader but she is more brave than i am. imagine going through endless hallways picking a door out of 100 getting her crush out of a gigantic cage and end up saving her friend when she is scared out of her wits from being dropped 10 feet from one floor to another when it magically opens up ( the floor). I'm also writing a story about when a criminal steals Gourge Washington dairy and is forced to stay in an old barn when a girl spots him and in that barn he finds the real Gourge Washington dairy with his signature.I'm that little girl who screams when i see him causing the police to chase after him. that's  another thing that is great about books. you can always picturing being part of it and that's who i pictured myself being : the scared little girl. but in real life i am a talent girl dancer that isn't afraid to speak her mind and (i hope) a good writer.
this is my third year in avin aley school for dance and I'm working on a mordon twist on Shakespeare classic a mid summers dream. i like sports but don't watch every game ( even though i  set up a fantasy football profile when i don't use it). i keep to myself a lot. I'm good at art and science. i pretty much figured for all you people who are reading my blogs want to know who is this person. that's me i guess.

p.splese post any questions or comments

Tuesday, November 22, 2011

sharks!
Do you think that sharks are bad?
Rachel, a nine year old girl thinks sharks aren’t bad and its just there pray is us humans. When she was in second grade she and other class mates wrote a story about them. I, Rachel figured  out that most people judge sharks even before they know them.Rachel, her self judged them before she know about them. But  she knows that there is nothing wrong with them.

“Do people cure about sharks” I ask Sarah, she, not like me wrote or know about them. She doesn’t know how sharks don’t bite people for fun they do because it is what they got taught when a kid. I ask her ”do you like sharks”. She replays “well it deepens. If  you bother then they don’t hurt you then I think their good.(up to here it’s good but as you start to read on she is judging them by how they might have acted and being raced about how they acted ). I don’t like them  “she says because they just go around hurting people and not curing.
And there you have folks people just don’t cure about sharks and go around judging them badly before even knowing about them.


Monday, November 14, 2011

punch!punch!




i am so mad at my sister.first she punched me and then, when i told on her, she made up a total lie! luckily my dad looked strait throw the act!

willow smith

here is some of my work for kids, its based on music:

I’m here talking about the new song by Willow Smith…….21 century girl!!!!!!!!!!!

The buzz is that this is a cool, rocking, amazing song. I love this song! It’s great for any type of girl and is made by a kid! How lucky can you get!
I was just wondering “do fans like Willow Smith’s song I whip my hair back and forth better than 21 century girl?”Well, what do you think?  Which one?
I have another question, who do you like better Katy Perry or Willow Smith?
Willow smith  v.s. katy perry

Sunday, November 13, 2011

my work

i 'm gonna post my writing work for everyone can connect to my work! my work can be from busy parents to  rocked out kids!some of my work will be for kids and not for adults but some of my work is for kids

frist time

hello people of the internet and welcome to my blog!as you can tel by the name i really into dance.i prefer hip-hop but can settle for African or ballet.I'm also really into writing i.i love to write with all my heart! i have a twin whose into singing. i guess you could say were the performing twins! got to go!:)-dancewrite